Woah, it shows 0.o Damn, it looks good, of course, but it's really too bad you ended up slacking off a bit :s That being said, that air looks beautiful, and the floor looks great in a more sketchy way. Other than inconsistency, there isn't anything wrong with this drawing.
ooohh!!! *//7//* i love painting!!! and your painting is just gorgeous! what program did u sues? Photoshop? O.O it looks soooooo awesome! this roughness makes this pic special! *w* i wish i could also paint like this!